update kamakura page

Signed-off-by: Robert Günzler <r@gnzler.io>

2 files changed, 47 insertions, 51 deletions

diff --git a/src/inc/kamakura.htm b/src/inc/kamakura.htm
index 643652e..22b9575 100644
--- a/src/inc/kamakura.htm
+++ b/src/inc/kamakura.htm
@@ -7,24 +7,20 @@ style="max-height:300px;object-fit:cover;object-position:0 63%;" /></p>
 <p>I call this one “trip zero”, because it was very much a trial run for
 me. The effects of having just moved to Japan for the year were still
 fresh and I altogether didn’t feel like exploring quite yet.</p>
-<!-- TODO: look at diary for this previous section -->
-<p>Kamakura being a common day-trip from Tokyo, I took the train from my
-home near Asakusa past Yokohama which only takes 1.5h. The weather was
-pretty meh, very cloudy and it looked like it would rain any moment.</p>
+<!-- TODO: look at diary for more here -->
+<p>Kamakura is a common day-trip from Tokyo and a short 1.5h train ride
+from my home near Asakusa. The weather was pretty meh, very cloudy and
+it looked like it would rain any moment.</p>
 <aside class="notice">
 <h1 class="nocapital">
 random history sidenote
 </h1>
 TODO: insert bit about history of the place
 </aside>
-<p>The main sight in town (according to most guide books at least) is
-the big Buddha<a href="#fn1" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref1"
-role="doc-noteref"><sup>1</sup></a>. Naturally I wanted to get that out
-of the way first.</p>
 <p>I had left the house earlier without breakfast, so off I went to the
 next Lawson to get myself some. For some reason I decided to get a
-Katsu-Sandwich<a href="#fn2" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref2"
-role="doc-noteref"><sup>2</sup></a>, which is out of character for me -
+Katsu-Sandwich<a href="#fn1" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref1"
+role="doc-noteref"><sup>1</sup></a>, which is out of character for me -
 I usually go for Onigiri - and then to have it on the beach nearby.
 Seeing as i was the only person eating anything there should’ve been
 hint enough. As soon as I sat down to take a bite, something comes
@@ -36,32 +32,34 @@ just waiting for me to unwrap more food. To have my breakfast in peace I
 just walk off into town again. Staying away from open spaces for a bit
 😄</p>
 <p>On my way back to the centre of town, I find a bucket of see-through
-plastic umbrellas <a href="#fn3" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref3"
-role="doc-noteref"><sup>3</sup></a> outside what looked like a beauty
+plastic umbrellas <a href="#fn2" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref2"
+role="doc-noteref"><sup>2</sup></a> outside what looked like a beauty
 saloon, with a sign telling passer-bys to take one (in Japanese ofc). I
 guess the visibly imminent rain made the shop keeper put them out there
 for tourists (conveniently helping him get rid of <em>what was probably
 left behind by his own clients</em>). Naturally I picked one up: This
 umbrella would be with me for the next months.</p>
-<p>There isn’t really that much to say about the big Buddha, in the end
-it’s just a large statue (that you can go inside of for a fee).</p>
+<p>There isn’t really that much to say about the big Buddha<a
+href="#fn3" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref3"
+role="doc-noteref"><sup>3</sup></a>, in the end it’s just a large statue
+(that you can go inside of for a fee).</p>
 <p>Despite the weather there was a surprising amount of tourists and I
 wanted to get out of the bustle, so I followed the street that had let
-to the temple <!-- TODO: what temple --> area. A bit further I came to
-some stairs next to one of the tunnels that lead out of the Kamakura
-city area, that cut through the surrounding hills. OrganicMaps told me
-there was a hiking path up there, which I could take to circle back
-towards the train station.</p>
+to the temple <!-- TODO: what temple --></p>
+<p>area. A bit further I came to some stairs next to one of the tunnels
+that lead out of the Kamakura city area, that cut through the
+surrounding hills. OrganicMaps told me there was a hiking path up there,
+which I could take to circle back towards the train station.</p>
 <!-- TODO: trail map? -->
 <section id="footnotes" class="footnotes footnotes-end-of-document"
 role="doc-endnotes">
 <hr />
 <ol>
-<li id="fn1"><p>??? <!-- TODO: insert link to wikipedia --><a
-href="#fnref1" class="footnote-back" role="doc-backlink">↩︎</a></p></li>
-<li id="fn2"><p>??? <!-- TODO: link to picture --><a href="#fnref2"
+<li id="fn1"><p>??? <!-- TODO: link to picture --><a href="#fnref1"
 class="footnote-back" role="doc-backlink">↩︎</a></p></li>
-<li id="fn3"><p>??? <!-- TODO: add picture link --><a href="#fnref3"
+<li id="fn2"><p>??? <!-- TODO: add picture link --><a href="#fnref2"
 class="footnote-back" role="doc-backlink">↩︎</a></p></li>
+<li id="fn3"><p>??? <!-- TODO: insert link to wikipedia --><a
+href="#fnref3" class="footnote-back" role="doc-backlink">↩︎</a></p></li>
 </ol>
 </section>
diff --git a/src/inc/kamakura.md b/src/inc/kamakura.md
index 350f9bb..e9e193c 100644
--- a/src/inc/kamakura.md
+++ b/src/inc/kamakura.md
@@ -5,14 +5,14 @@ date: 2023-04-22
 ![](../../media/content/kamakura/maple.jpg){style="max-height:300px;object-fit:cover;object-position:0 63%;"}
 
 I call this one "trip zero", because it was very much a trial run for me. The
-effects of having just moved to Japan for the year were still fresh and I 
+effects of having just moved to Japan for the year were still fresh and I
 altogether didn't feel like exploring quite yet.
 
-<!-- TODO: look at diary for this previous section -->
+<!-- TODO: look at diary for more here -->
 
-Kamakura being a common day-trip from Tokyo, I took the train from my home near 
-Asakusa past Yokohama which only takes 1.5h. The weather was pretty meh, very 
-cloudy and it looked like it would rain any moment.
+Kamakura is a common day-trip from Tokyo and a short 1.5h train ride from my
+home near  Asakusa. The weather was pretty meh, very cloudy and it looked like
+it would rain any moment.
 
 <aside class="notice">
 <h1 class="nocapital">random history sidenote</h1>
@@ -20,41 +20,39 @@ cloudy and it looked like it would rain any moment.
 TODO: insert bit about history of the place
 </aside>
 
-The main sight in town (according to most guide books at least) is the big
-Buddha[^buddha]. Naturally I wanted to get that out of the way first.
-
-[^buddha]: ??? <!-- TODO: insert link to wikipedia --> 
-
-I had left the house earlier without breakfast, so off I went to the next 
-Lawson to get myself some.
-For some reason I decided to get a Katsu-Sandwich[^sando], which is out of 
-character for me - I usually go for Onigiri - and then to have it on the beach nearby.
-Seeing as i was the only person eating anything there should've been hint 
-enough. As soon as I sat down to take a bite, something comes dashing down past
-my head. I am obviously startled but not prepared for the bird to come back to 
-actually pick the sandwich out of my hand this time around.
+I had left the house earlier without breakfast, so off I went to the next
+Lawson to get myself some. For some reason I decided to get a
+Katsu-Sandwich[^sando], which is out of character for me - I usually go for
+Onigiri - and then to have it on the beach nearby. Seeing as i was the only
+person eating anything there should've been hint enough. As soon as I sat down
+to take a bite, something comes dashing down past my head. I am obviously
+startled but not prepared for the bird to come back to actually pick the
+sandwich out of my hand this time around.
 
 [^sando]: ??? <!-- TODO: link to picture --> 
 
-There were a few birds (crows in my interpretation) circling overhead just 
-waiting for me to unwrap more food. To have my breakfast in peace I just walk 
+There were a few birds (crows in my interpretation) circling overhead just
+waiting for me to unwrap more food. To have my breakfast in peace I just walk
 off into town again. Staying away from open spaces for a bit 😄
 
-On my way back to the centre of town, I find a bucket of see-through plastic 
-umbrellas [^umbrella] outside what looked like a beauty saloon, with a sign 
-telling passer-bys  to take one (in Japanese ofc). I guess the visibly imminent 
-rain made the  shop keeper put them out there for tourists (conveniently helping 
-him get rid of *what was probably left behind by his own clients*). Naturally I 
-picked one up: This umbrella would be with me for the next months.
+On my way back to the centre of town, I find a bucket of see-through plastic
+umbrellas [^umbrella] outside what looked like a beauty saloon, with a sign
+telling passer-bys  to take one (in Japanese ofc). I guess the visibly imminent
+rain made the  shop keeper put them out there for tourists (conveniently
+helping him get rid of *what was probably left behind by his own clients*).
+Naturally I picked one up: This umbrella would be with me for the next months.
 
 [^umbrella]: ??? <!-- TODO: add picture link -->
 
-There isn't really that much to say about the big Buddha, in the end it's just 
-a large statue (that you can go inside of for a fee).
+There isn't really that much to say about the big Buddha[^buddha], in the end
+it's just a large statue (that you can go inside of for a fee).
+
+[^buddha]: ??? <!-- TODO: insert link to wikipedia --> 
 
 Despite the weather there was a surprising amount of tourists and I wanted to
 get out of the bustle, so I followed the street that had let to the temple 
 <!-- TODO: what temple -->
+
 area. A bit further I came to some stairs next to one of
 the tunnels that lead out of the Kamakura city area, that cut through the
 surrounding hills. OrganicMaps told me there was a hiking path up there, which