plan9-cursors: light edit

Signed-off-by: Robert Günzler <r@gnzler.io>

3 files changed, 18 insertions, 21 deletions

diff --git a/site/plan9-cursors.html b/site/plan9-cursors.html
index 816f0f9..5ccb37a 100644
--- a/site/plan9-cursors.html
+++ b/site/plan9-cursors.html
@@ -42,24 +42,23 @@
 2025-01-24
 </span>
 <p>I found <a href="https://π.duncano.de" class="uri"
-target="_blank">https://π.duncano.de</a> which has an xcursor-theme
-inspired and based on the <a href="https://plan9.io/plan9/"
-target="_blank">plan9</a> cursors set:</p>
+target="_blank">https://π.duncano.de</a>, a xcursor-theme inspired and
+based on the <a href="https://plan9.io/plan9/" target="_blank">plan9</a>
+cursors set:</p>
 <figure>
 <img src="/media/content/plan9-cursors/xcursor-plan9-preview.png"
 alt="xcursor-plan9 preview" />
 <figcaption aria-hidden="true">xcursor-plan9 preview</figcaption>
 </figure>
-<p>Installing that on my system, it turns out the Wayland ecosystem
+<p>Installing that on my system, it turns out, the Wayland ecosystem
 still has a <a
 href="https://blogs.kde.org/2024/10/09/cursor-size-problems-in-wayland-explained/"
 target="_blank">hard time</a> with cursor scaling. So I tried my hand at
 fixing the problem and making something that will be usable once more <a
 href="https://blog.vladzahorodnii.com/2024/10/06/svg-cursors-everything-that-you-need-to-know-about-them/"
 target="_blank">modern</a> approaches take wider hold.</p>
-<p>I have created SVGs based on the above pixel-based cursors and
-written a script, that is heavily inspired and based on what I found in
-KDE’s <a
+<p>I created SVGs based on the above pixel-based cursors and wrote a
+script, that is heavily inspired and based on what I found in KDE’s <a
 href="https://invent.kde.org/plasma/breeze/-/tree/master/cursors/Breeze/"
 target="_blank">Breeze</a> sources.</p>
 <p>Check it out: <a href="https://git.sr.ht/~robertgzr/plan9-cursors"
@@ -75,7 +74,7 @@ done</li>
 </ul>
 </main>
 <footer>
-Edited on 2025-01-24 <a href="https://git.sr.ht/~robertgzr/site/tree/master/src/inc/plan9-cursors.htm" target="_blank">[src]</a>
+Edited on 2025-11-22 <a href="https://git.sr.ht/~robertgzr/site/tree/master/src/inc/plan9-cursors.htm" target="_blank">[src]</a>
 <a href="mailto:~robertgzr/public-inbox@lists.sr.ht">[comments]</a>
 <br>
 <b>robertgzr</b>
diff --git a/src/inc/plan9-cursors.htm b/src/inc/plan9-cursors.htm
index feb6cf5..2cf6a11 100644
--- a/src/inc/plan9-cursors.htm
+++ b/src/inc/plan9-cursors.htm
@@ -3,24 +3,23 @@
 2025-01-24
 </span>
 <p>I found <a href="https://π.duncano.de" class="uri"
-target="_blank">https://π.duncano.de</a> which has an xcursor-theme
-inspired and based on the <a href="https://plan9.io/plan9/"
-target="_blank">plan9</a> cursors set:</p>
+target="_blank">https://π.duncano.de</a>, a xcursor-theme inspired and
+based on the <a href="https://plan9.io/plan9/" target="_blank">plan9</a>
+cursors set:</p>
 <figure>
 <img src="/media/content/plan9-cursors/xcursor-plan9-preview.png"
 alt="xcursor-plan9 preview" />
 <figcaption aria-hidden="true">xcursor-plan9 preview</figcaption>
 </figure>
-<p>Installing that on my system, it turns out the Wayland ecosystem
+<p>Installing that on my system, it turns out, the Wayland ecosystem
 still has a <a
 href="https://blogs.kde.org/2024/10/09/cursor-size-problems-in-wayland-explained/"
 target="_blank">hard time</a> with cursor scaling. So I tried my hand at
 fixing the problem and making something that will be usable once more <a
 href="https://blog.vladzahorodnii.com/2024/10/06/svg-cursors-everything-that-you-need-to-know-about-them/"
 target="_blank">modern</a> approaches take wider hold.</p>
-<p>I have created SVGs based on the above pixel-based cursors and
-written a script, that is heavily inspired and based on what I found in
-KDE’s <a
+<p>I created SVGs based on the above pixel-based cursors and wrote a
+script, that is heavily inspired and based on what I found in KDE’s <a
 href="https://invent.kde.org/plasma/breeze/-/tree/master/cursors/Breeze/"
 target="_blank">Breeze</a> sources.</p>
 <p>Check it out: <a href="https://git.sr.ht/~robertgzr/plan9-cursors"
diff --git a/src/inc/plan9-cursors.md b/src/inc/plan9-cursors.md
index b0a8433..2759fe7 100644
--- a/src/inc/plan9-cursors.md
+++ b/src/inc/plan9-cursors.md
@@ -2,19 +2,18 @@
 date: 2025-01-24
 ---
 
-I found <https://π.duncano.de> which has an xcursor-theme inspired and
-based on the [plan9] cursors set:
+I found <https://π.duncano.de>, a xcursor-theme inspired and based on the
+[plan9] cursors set:
 
 ![xcursor-plan9 preview](/media/content/plan9-cursors/xcursor-plan9-preview.png)
 
-Installing that on my system, it turns out the Wayland ecosystem still has a
+Installing that on my system, it turns out, the Wayland ecosystem still has a
 [hard time] with cursor scaling. So I tried my hand at fixing the problem and
 making something that will be usable once more [modern] approaches take wider
 hold.
 
-I have created SVGs based on the above pixel-based cursors and written a
-script, that is heavily inspired and based on what I found in KDE's [Breeze]
-sources.
+I created SVGs based on the above pixel-based cursors and wrote a script,
+that is heavily inspired and based on what I found in KDE's [Breeze] sources.
 
 Check it out: <https://git.sr.ht/~robertgzr/plan9-cursors>