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@@ -7,24 +7,20 @@ style="max-height:300px;object-fit:cover;object-position:0 63%;" /></p>
 <p>I call this one “trip zero”, because it was very much a trial run for
 me. The effects of having just moved to Japan for the year were still
 fresh and I altogether didn’t feel like exploring quite yet.</p>
-<!-- TODO: look at diary for this previous section -->
-<p>Kamakura being a common day-trip from Tokyo, I took the train from my
-home near Asakusa past Yokohama which only takes 1.5h. The weather was
-pretty meh, very cloudy and it looked like it would rain any moment.</p>
+<!-- TODO: look at diary for more here -->
+<p>Kamakura is a common day-trip from Tokyo and a short 1.5h train ride
+from my home near Asakusa. The weather was pretty meh, very cloudy and
+it looked like it would rain any moment.</p>
 <aside class="notice">
 <h1 class="nocapital">
 random history sidenote
 </h1>
 TODO: insert bit about history of the place
 </aside>
-<p>The main sight in town (according to most guide books at least) is
-the big Buddha<a href="#fn1" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref1"
-role="doc-noteref"><sup>1</sup></a>. Naturally I wanted to get that out
-of the way first.</p>
 <p>I had left the house earlier without breakfast, so off I went to the
 next Lawson to get myself some. For some reason I decided to get a
-Katsu-Sandwich<a href="#fn2" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref2"
-role="doc-noteref"><sup>2</sup></a>, which is out of character for me -
+Katsu-Sandwich<a href="#fn1" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref1"
+role="doc-noteref"><sup>1</sup></a>, which is out of character for me -
 I usually go for Onigiri - and then to have it on the beach nearby.
 Seeing as i was the only person eating anything there should’ve been
 hint enough. As soon as I sat down to take a bite, something comes
@@ -36,32 +32,34 @@ just waiting for me to unwrap more food. To have my breakfast in peace I
 just walk off into town again. Staying away from open spaces for a bit
 😄</p>
 <p>On my way back to the centre of town, I find a bucket of see-through
-plastic umbrellas <a href="#fn3" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref3"
-role="doc-noteref"><sup>3</sup></a> outside what looked like a beauty
+plastic umbrellas <a href="#fn2" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref2"
+role="doc-noteref"><sup>2</sup></a> outside what looked like a beauty
 saloon, with a sign telling passer-bys to take one (in Japanese ofc). I
 guess the visibly imminent rain made the shop keeper put them out there
 for tourists (conveniently helping him get rid of <em>what was probably
 left behind by his own clients</em>). Naturally I picked one up: This
 umbrella would be with me for the next months.</p>
-<p>There isn’t really that much to say about the big Buddha, in the end
-it’s just a large statue (that you can go inside of for a fee).</p>
+<p>There isn’t really that much to say about the big Buddha<a
+href="#fn3" class="footnote-ref" id="fnref3"
+role="doc-noteref"><sup>3</sup></a>, in the end it’s just a large statue
+(that you can go inside of for a fee).</p>
 <p>Despite the weather there was a surprising amount of tourists and I
 wanted to get out of the bustle, so I followed the street that had let
-to the temple <!-- TODO: what temple --> area. A bit further I came to
-some stairs next to one of the tunnels that lead out of the Kamakura
-city area, that cut through the surrounding hills. OrganicMaps told me
-there was a hiking path up there, which I could take to circle back
-towards the train station.</p>
+to the temple <!-- TODO: what temple --></p>
+<p>area. A bit further I came to some stairs next to one of the tunnels
+that lead out of the Kamakura city area, that cut through the
+surrounding hills. OrganicMaps told me there was a hiking path up there,
+which I could take to circle back towards the train station.</p>
 <!-- TODO: trail map? -->
 <section id="footnotes" class="footnotes footnotes-end-of-document"
 role="doc-endnotes">
 <hr />
 <ol>
-<li id="fn1"><p>??? <!-- TODO: insert link to wikipedia --><a
-href="#fnref1" class="footnote-back" role="doc-backlink">↩︎</a></p></li>
-<li id="fn2"><p>??? <!-- TODO: link to picture --><a href="#fnref2"
+<li id="fn1"><p>??? <!-- TODO: link to picture --><a href="#fnref1"
 class="footnote-back" role="doc-backlink">↩︎</a></p></li>
-<li id="fn3"><p>??? <!-- TODO: add picture link --><a href="#fnref3"
+<li id="fn2"><p>??? <!-- TODO: add picture link --><a href="#fnref2"
 class="footnote-back" role="doc-backlink">↩︎</a></p></li>
+<li id="fn3"><p>??? <!-- TODO: insert link to wikipedia --><a
+href="#fnref3" class="footnote-back" role="doc-backlink">↩︎</a></p></li>
 </ol>
 </section>