sony-wf1000xm3-battery: light edit

Signed-off-by: Robert Günzler <r@gnzler.io>

2 files changed, 24 insertions, 26 deletions

diff --git a/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.htm b/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.htm
index 6f7bbd6..1031721 100644
--- a/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.htm
+++ b/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.htm
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ them and use them mostly around the city to listen to podcasts and the
 occasional bit of music.</p>
 <p><img src="/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/headphones.jpg"
 class="size-l" /></p>
-<p>After they would first slowly show signs of not holding their full
+<p>After they slowly started showing signs of not holding their full
 charge anymore, the batteries completely died on me after some 3 years.
 I was fully prepared to have to throw them out when I learned that the
 batteries are just standard cells and can be easily swapped.</p>
@@ -25,21 +25,21 @@ batteries are just standard cells and can be easily swapped.</p>
 class="size-s" alt="pry open" /> <img
 src="/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/02_lid_off.jpg"
 class="size-s" alt="lid off" /></p>
-<p>Use a spudger or ideally two guitar picks and wedge them in to the
+<p>Use a spudger or ideally two guitar picks and wedge them into the
 thin gap between the top cover and the base of the earphones. Don’t
-worry about breaking anything. As long as the material of your tools is
-plastic, you won’t damage anything. This is by far the most tedious step
-of the process (if you don’t have the picks). There is a little bit of
-adhesive behind the lid, so once you get the halfs to seperate you might
-have to widdgle a little.</p>
+worry about breaking anything, as long as the material of your tools is
+plastic, you won’t damage the headphones. This is by far the most
+tedious step of the process (if you don’t have the picks). There is a
+little bit of adhesive behind the lid, so once you get the halfs to
+seperate you might have to wiggle them loose.</p>
 <p><img src="/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/03_screws_out.jpg"
 class="size-s" alt="screws out" /> <img
 src="/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/04_lift_top.jpg"
 class="size-s" alt="lift top" /></p>
-<p>With the phillips head remove the two screws that secure the visible
-part in place and then carefully lift it out, flip it over. There is a
-ribbon cable connecting the touch sensor and LED on the top to PCB
-deeper inside the earpiece.</p>
+<p>With the Phillips-head remove the two screws that secure the visible
+part in place and then carefully lift it out and flip it over. There is
+a ribbon cable connecting the touch sensor and LED on the top to PCB
+inside the earpiece.</p>
 <figure>
 <img src="/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/05_battery_out.jpg"
 class="size-s" alt="battery out" />
diff --git a/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.md b/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.md
index e617c2b..4f324f4 100644
--- a/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.md
+++ b/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ music.
 
 ![](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/headphones.jpg){class=size-l}
 
-After they would first slowly show signs of not holding their full charge
+After they slowly started showing signs of not holding their full charge
 anymore, the batteries completely died on me after some 3 years. I was fully
 prepared to have to throw them out when I learned that the batteries are just
 standard cells and can be easily swapped.
@@ -27,20 +27,19 @@ Ok, let's go:
 ![pry open](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/01_pry_open.jpg){class="size-s"}
 ![lid off](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/02_lid_off.jpg){class="size-s"}
 
-Use a spudger or ideally two guitar picks and wedge them in to the thin gap
+Use a spudger or ideally two guitar picks and wedge them into the thin gap
 between the top cover and the base of the earphones. Don't worry about breaking
-anything. As long as the material of your tools is plastic, you won't damage
-anything. This is by far the most tedious step of the process (if you don't
-have the picks). There is a little bit of adhesive behind the lid, so once you
-get the halfs to seperate you might have to widdgle a little.
+anything, as long as the material of your tools is plastic, you won't damage
+the headphones. This is by far the most tedious step of the process (if you
+don't have the picks). There is a little bit of adhesive behind the lid, so
+once you get the halfs to seperate you might have to wiggle them loose.
 
 ![screws out](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/03_screws_out.jpg){class="size-s"}
 ![lift top](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/04_lift_top.jpg){class="size-s"}
 
-With the phillips head remove the two screws that secure the visible part in
-place and then carefully lift it out, flip it over. There is a ribbon cable
-connecting the touch sensor and LED on the top to PCB deeper inside the
-earpiece.
+With the Phillips-head remove the two screws that secure the visible part in
+place and then carefully lift it out and flip it over. There is a ribbon cable
+connecting the touch sensor and LED on the top to PCB inside the earpiece.
 
 ![battery out](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/05_battery_out.jpg){class="size-s"}
 
@@ -55,10 +54,9 @@ pushed it back into the housing.
 
 Before putting in the new battery make sure to check the writing on it or use
 the shape as a reference to figure out which side is the negative pole. Put
-that side down, touching to the contacts.
-The replacement batteries I got where a different brand and had all the
-labeling on the plus pole. While the original VARTA branded batteries had it
-exactly reversed. On my first attempt I didn't pay attention and put them in
-the wrong way around.
+that side down, touching to the contacts. The replacement batteries I got where
+a different brand and had all the labeling on the plus pole. While the original
+VARTA branded batteries had it exactly reversed. On my first attempt I didn't
+pay attention and put them in the wrong way around.
 
 ![battery comparison](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/battery_comparison.jpg)