sony-wf1000xm3-battery: light edit

Signed-off-by: Robert Günzler <r@gnzler.io>

1 files changed, 13 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.md b/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.md
index e617c2b..4f324f4 100644
--- a/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.md
+++ b/src/inc/sony-wf1000xm3-battery.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ music.
 
 ![](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/headphones.jpg){class=size-l}
 
-After they would first slowly show signs of not holding their full charge
+After they slowly started showing signs of not holding their full charge
 anymore, the batteries completely died on me after some 3 years. I was fully
 prepared to have to throw them out when I learned that the batteries are just
 standard cells and can be easily swapped.
@@ -27,20 +27,19 @@ Ok, let's go:
 ![pry open](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/01_pry_open.jpg){class="size-s"}
 ![lid off](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/02_lid_off.jpg){class="size-s"}
 
-Use a spudger or ideally two guitar picks and wedge them in to the thin gap
+Use a spudger or ideally two guitar picks and wedge them into the thin gap
 between the top cover and the base of the earphones. Don't worry about breaking
-anything. As long as the material of your tools is plastic, you won't damage
-anything. This is by far the most tedious step of the process (if you don't
-have the picks). There is a little bit of adhesive behind the lid, so once you
-get the halfs to seperate you might have to widdgle a little.
+anything, as long as the material of your tools is plastic, you won't damage
+the headphones. This is by far the most tedious step of the process (if you
+don't have the picks). There is a little bit of adhesive behind the lid, so
+once you get the halfs to seperate you might have to wiggle them loose.
 
 ![screws out](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/03_screws_out.jpg){class="size-s"}
 ![lift top](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/04_lift_top.jpg){class="size-s"}
 
-With the phillips head remove the two screws that secure the visible part in
-place and then carefully lift it out, flip it over. There is a ribbon cable
-connecting the touch sensor and LED on the top to PCB deeper inside the
-earpiece.
+With the Phillips-head remove the two screws that secure the visible part in
+place and then carefully lift it out and flip it over. There is a ribbon cable
+connecting the touch sensor and LED on the top to PCB inside the earpiece.
 
 ![battery out](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/05_battery_out.jpg){class="size-s"}
 
@@ -55,10 +54,9 @@ pushed it back into the housing.
 
 Before putting in the new battery make sure to check the writing on it or use
 the shape as a reference to figure out which side is the negative pole. Put
-that side down, touching to the contacts.
-The replacement batteries I got where a different brand and had all the
-labeling on the plus pole. While the original VARTA branded batteries had it
-exactly reversed. On my first attempt I didn't pay attention and put them in
-the wrong way around.
+that side down, touching to the contacts. The replacement batteries I got where
+a different brand and had all the labeling on the plus pole. While the original
+VARTA branded batteries had it exactly reversed. On my first attempt I didn't
+pay attention and put them in the wrong way around.
 
 ![battery comparison](/media/content/sony-wf1000xm3-battery/battery_comparison.jpg)